That's funny, there is nothing austere about this piece. Perhaps you are playing a little game, putting the opposite word on the piece, so strong?I would like to see you really break it up! I've been watching for a while, I guess I'm looking for something unexpected. A surprise!
Well now, we seem to be on the same wavelength as "absence makes the heart grow fonder" was my recent Maxim of the Week (http://ragzedge.blogspot.com/2010/09/maxim-of-week_12.html)No such thing as coincidence? Isn't it remarkable when seemingly unconnected elements tap into the same creative impetus!